Today we sat down and talked about all the feedback we got from the group project presentations. we relised a change in some of the story storyline would”nt be a bad idea , such as instead of having a younger and older klye kumer just have the one , we talked about how we could get the story to flow better , and decided more research into dreams could be done. we brainstormed until we gathered a lot of ideas for the new storyline that would do the origional idea justice but at the same keep inline with it